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<hr><p align="left"><small>发信人: bergkamp (至尊玉), 信区: Oversea <br>
标  题: 老外对我的ps的点评（转载） <br>
发信站: 飘渺水云间 (Thu Oct 11 22:01:52 2001), 转信 <br>
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发信人: windben (素-幸福的人不远行), 信区: goabroad <br>
标  题: 老外对我的ps的点评（转载） <br>
发信站: 饮水思源 (2001年10月11日21:02:28 星期四), 站内信件 <br>
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发信人: rood (神鹞~鹞子翻身~一头雾水申请中~), 信区: AdvancedEdu <br>
标  题: 老外对我的ps的点评,希望对大家有启发 <br>
发信站: BBS 水木清华站 (Sat Sep 29 17:37:21 2001) <br>
我的ps就不贴出来了, <br>
我的ps是用的4段 <br>
1.my education and work experience <br>
2.fields that interest me <br>
3.why i choose xxx university <br>
4.my objective <br>
我觉得他说的第一第二点都还是有帮助 <br>
原文如下: <br>
Some comments: <br>
1-Don't talk directly to the graduate committee (avoid "you" and "your") <br>
2-Avoid sounding too enthusiastic.  You want to demonstrate your interests i <br>
n a professional way.  Avoid emotional language. <br>

3-You may want to drop the titles preceding your paragraphs and <br>
concentrate   on making your statement one coherent piece of writing (ie an <br>
essay).  This <br>
may take time, so if you don't want to because you are sure that you will ge <br>
t in, I think you can get away without doing it.  If you are concerned that <br>
you may not get in, then you should do it.  The statement of purpose is very <br>
 important.  It demonstrates who you are and more importantly it shows that <br>
you can write effectively. <br>
4-Make sure you get many people to proofread your essay.  That way you will <br>
have many ideas on how to revise it. <br>
Great job!  Let me know if you would like me to proofread anything else <br>
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-- <br>
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你依然比晨风还清新 <br>
我不知不觉打开窗棂 <br>
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朋友，天堂好吗？ <br>
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-- <br>
I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly <br>
or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. <br>

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※ 来源:·飘渺水云间 Freecity.dhs.org·[FROM: bergkamp] <br>
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